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The story of Harvey
Author: cade
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(Added on Aug 8, 2001)
(This month 83089 readers) (Total 127751 readers) |
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Guest of wealthy Sheikh with sadistic interests visits his training rooms. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (6/10) |
Highest
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Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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Despite being at opposite ends of the reviewing scale, both tamerlan and hyphen666 are perceptive. This is a sadistic fantasy wherein the women are complete, virtually anonymous objects and the punishments inflicted are described in great detail. Competent but not great BDSM writing. None-the-less I have seen a great number (make that a very great number) of first time authors do worse. Keep up the attempts, good writing takes time. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
tamerlan
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Oct 21, 2002 |
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boring because the women have no individuality (3/10)
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Reviewer:
submiz
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Dec 28, 2001 |
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brutal torture, little sexual content. well written. (4/10)
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Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Oct 23, 2001 |
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A good beginning, but nothing orginal. The descriptions of the tortures are quite a bit more detailed than normal, which is a plus. Hope to see more in the very near future. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
jumpmonk
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Aug 8, 2001 |
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I think I read this story in another site some time ago. I liked it a lot then, and I like it now. Seems the author is taking too long to come up with the next installment. If this story were longer, I'd give it a 10. (8/10)
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