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Four Stars
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on May 8, 2006)
(This month 17393 readers) (Total 28709 readers) |
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Suburbanites meet Urbanites |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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Two things put me off right from the start. Pencil-eraser nipples is one. Unless you use pencils with the girth of yer pinkie, that is.
The other thing was a forehead tan wrinkling. The skin was prolly waiting at the kitchen sink untill the wrinkling was done. Right.
Besides the aformentioned -and the funny accent which holds the middle between an until now undiscovered Scottish accent and something the Banjo player from "Deliverance" would have spoken, should he have talked- "Four Stars" was a delight to read and merits just that. And a half.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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very nicely done as are most of your works, i try to be both consistant and faithful, epscialy for goof consistant writers (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (May 9, 2006)
- Dear mkemse,
Thank you for being a faithful reader and for this latest, most generous Review.
Faibhar
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| Reviewer:
jennjenn
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May 9, 2006 |
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exquisitely written ... i have not read any of your other material but i believe i will now ... thank you (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (May 10, 2006)
- Dear jennjenn,
You are most kind. Glad that you enjoyed reading ****.
As for reading others, by all means do. Just one caveat. It has been said, and accurately so, that "Four Stars" does depart somewhat from the norm.
For more mild fare, your might try "The Bra That Got Away". Otherwise, go for it.
Faibhar
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 9, 2006 |
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A fine story, up to the Faibhar standard of outstanding writing.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (May 9, 2006)
- Dear chksng19,
A "glowing" Review. Thank you very much, and of course, glad that you enjoyed the read.
Faibhar
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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May 8, 2006 |
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Not a typical Faibhar story but chock full of his excellent prose. One of my favorite authors on this site. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (May 9, 2006)
- Dear "Faithful Companion",
Thank you again for the Review. Things connecting to this site have recently been a bit hinky for whatever reason, but a more lengthy story is set to be posted as soon as the "kinks" are worked out. Hope that you enjoy it too.
Faibhar
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