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Reality Sucks
Author: Road Runner
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(Added on Jul 20, 2000)
(This month 52797 readers) (Total 65527 readers) |
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Melissa likes to fantasize about being turned into a sex slave and humiliated. But when her fantasy comes true, she finds it to be rather disappointing--or does she? |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
texancharm{E.C.Holland}
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Aug 15, 2008 |
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Overall, this story has a strong backbone, lots of promise, but only nominal return. It is not all bad, certainly, and i have a few suggestions, take em or leave em. First, it would have been nice to be forewarned of theincest factor. Not all the deviants who frequent this site kink that way. Second, beef up your charecters more. As a writer of BDSM knik, yo are faced with the challenge that thousands like this have been written. To truly stand out among them, seek to show your reader how your charecters feel: make us think as though we are there. Add in a bit more humiliation and pain (my personal preferance) and youve got a real gem. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer |
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Sep 8, 2000 |
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Not only reality sucks, but this story, too. Good start, rapid fall-behind. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
andy |
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Jul 29, 2000 |
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Good begining of two young boys discovering thier cousin is a secret slut for humiliation but needs more chapters to progress her torment (7/10)
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hyphen 666 |
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Jul 29, 2000 |
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sex slave to a couple of horny nerds, how droll. Has possibilities if the two kids can come up with some novel methods to humiliate their victim. Only time and a few more chapters will tell the tale. (6/10)
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