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Her Next Door
Author: Gallus
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(Added on Apr 26, 2006)
(This month 106238 readers) (Total 242361 readers) |
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Suburban housewife becomes a slave to her next door neighbour...and her friends |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chzwiz007
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Nov 12, 2011 |
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Crap! Vicious creeps. It would be so easy to put these fucking jerk off bitches in jail. None of them have a speck of respectability and decency. The beginning was totally fucked up. It was so easy for her to get out of this.
You should show some love towards your slave every once in a while. Your beginning should show hints that Sandy wanted this. Total sick fucking garbage. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSMcurious1
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Dec 10, 2008 |
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I really enjoyed this story every captivating. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
25toLife
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Jun 30, 2007 |
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enjoyed it very much, hope to see more soon (9/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Mar 27, 2007 |
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Superb. A set up for the next one (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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I don't agree with the other reviewers. The start was terrible. Here she is being betrayed by a friend and does she try to talk her way out of it? Does she try to play for time? Does she try to forcefully take the negatives or erase the harddrive or whatever? Does she try to threaten her with legal action? No! She immediately gives in. That's not how people work. A better start would have been "Lynn blackmails Sandy into being her sexslave. And now for the sex." That would have at least been honest and the sex is nice. (7/10)
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BlackIrish1495
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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This story held my attention and I cannot wait until you write more. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
themaneloco
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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All is going well so far, keep it up. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
RRW60969A
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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A slow start with a ton of potential for more chapters. This story needs to continue. Now that the girl is discobvering her submissive nature, they need to continue the transformation to slave, Maid, sex toy, Pony, whatever pleases her Mistress's. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
slutsteph
(Edit) (Jul 4, 2006)
- Yes, girl totally agrees with this review. So many things are possible!
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 27, 2006 |
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it has the promise of a really good story, as you add more i will adjust my review accordingly
It just keeps getting better (9/10)
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chksng19
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May 19, 2006 |
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A familiar plot with some fresh touches. Interested in seeing where this one goes. (7/10)
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pet10
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May 18, 2006 |
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I recon so Lynn isn’t very sadistic she out and away like to humiliated Sandy only not to torture extremely and both of them are enjoying the pleasure of lesbian love… In this respect she is no egoist. The story is till now a mild very feminine tale. Remains the intimacy the intimacy in this way? (9/10)
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slutsteph
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May 10, 2006 |
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A very good and careful crafted start. girl looks forward to the next chapters. (8/10)
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tominny
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Apr 27, 2006 |
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very nice beginning can not wait for more Thanks. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
thecollectorii
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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a good start far from finished though (7/10)
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