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Smiling eyes
Author: redEva
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(Added on Jan 3, 2006)
(This month 49621 readers) (Total 59104 readers) |
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Mature woman fulfils her own fantasy by introducing young man to the pleasures of flesh. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
agp_millie
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Jan 26, 2006 |
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Dearest Red,
hee! hee! I could feel every drop of water on that 'bronze'? (lol) body. Looking forward to Pt.2 and 3 and 4 and 5 and .....
Love from T. and you really must read Nikita's stories too. mmmm!
Chat soonest! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2006)
- *grinz* hehe .... mmmm ... soon
Thank you for review!
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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Once again, I'm wondering just how nice it would be to star in one of your stories, but since I'm neither 18 or have 18" arms (the curious reader should check out redEva's "Neighbor"), I doubt I'm a candidate. Nevertheless, I do enjoy being a voyeur and really appreciate how you get right down to it and deliver the erotic goodies from the start.
And if you ever need a quick review prior to submittal, send me an email, I'd be happy to oblige. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2006)
- Thank you so much for your kind words. You are to kind, but I am glad you like it. BTW
I dont remember mentioning 18 anywhere ;P
Thank you for your kind offer, you can definitely expect me to take you up on it :)
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| Reviewer:
errol42
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Jan 10, 2006 |
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very weak and poorly written (4/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2006)
- Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2006)
- Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 9, 2006 |
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A very nice start. I was not bothered by the unusual grammar. I think much of it was deliberate. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2006)
- Thank you for your review, some of the "unusual" structure is deliberate - some, hate to admit, is just because did not have it proofread :) , I will pay more attention to it in future ;)
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Jan 7, 2006 |
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Beautiful, beautiful beginning > goes right into my erotic centre. Dripping, sensual D/s. :-)
Technicalities: sometimes a or the is missing, of and off mixed up, some other minor details to proofread away.
Please do continue and tell us more! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2006)
- Ranai,
Thank you for your review and complements. You humble and shame me! I so should have had this proofread ( can I take your interest as volunteering to take a look at the story before I post here? )
Glad you enjoyed it
I have to get back to him
soon ;)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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Aahhhh...the innocence of youth and for here the tables are turned. Yes, please continue. I'm learning from you...(grin) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
redEva
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2006)
- Thank you
I am so glad you like it! I will continue he is
quite nice piece of
candy!
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