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Room Service
Author: Kev
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(Added on Dec 8, 2005)
(This month 50848 readers) (Total 64869 readers) |
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A petite Latina maid find a pair of silky panties hanging on a door. She picks them up and this lead her to a night her young body never experienced. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
Highest
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Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
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Dec 13, 2005 |
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A tale nicely turned. Looking for a sequel; perhaps with a couple? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2005)
- I left the story open ended so that I could do a sequel if I found the inspiration. Thank for the great vote *bows humbly*
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Reviewer:
geoff
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Dec 9, 2005 |
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an interesting vignette, too short but enjoyable. Well written though. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Dec 10, 2005)
- Thank you for the kind words. I admit its short and it was my intention to keep it short with an open end. A way to write chapters without the preassure of an unfinished story.
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