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Orphan Sabrina
Author: Burton Kurtz
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(Added on Oct 8, 2005)
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A young orphan girl is raised by a Catholic priest and is taught a different kind of theology. This story is pure fiction and may be offensive to those who find pre-adolescent sexuality repulsive. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Foxysake
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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needs some imrpovement, but a good start.
*note: chap 3 is a repetition of chap 1 (7/10)
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Dododecapod
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Interesting start. I find it interesting that you haven't focussed on Sabrina's loss of innocence, but rather had her as a willing participant; I'm not sure whether this increases or decreases the erotic aspects, but it somewhat reduces the emotional impact, in my opinion.
Your writing is a little shallow, but readable and clear, and you clearly edit well. An enjoyable piece. (7/10)
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