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Ronnie Repents
Author: Richard Stryker
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(Added on Sep 14, 2005)
(This month 51470 readers) (Total 64617 readers) |
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Ronnie was a wayward wife who, much to husband Craig's annoyance, denied him his sexual pleasures while offering them and more to her affairs. Finally Craig traps her and forces her to admit what she has been doing and then gives her a choice - repent and be punished or pack her bags and go. Ronnie elects to be punished and comes face to face with Greg Dawson the self-styled Corrective Action Therapist. After a learning session with him, Ronnie is subjected to more abuse before she finally decides what she wants to do... Jam packed with torture, sex action and some very descriptive scenes of male domination. |
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Sep 16, 2005 |
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Ah Richard, you are quite the tease. I wonder if the little lady will truly repent or need another visit to Mr. Dawson. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
RichardStryker
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2005)
- Probably another visit. But that is for another day and as for teasing - well, the greatest of pleasures (and pain) can be administered through a little bit of teasing!
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Sep 15, 2005 |
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The story itself is not bad. The repetition of the opening paragraphs deeper into the story was a bit awkward but the story as a whole is quite good. I won't bother to repeat the comments of others as to weather the blatant linkage to a pay site would constitute spamming or not. I suspect you could have accomplished the same thing with a bit more subtlety (8/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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my rating is baed on the fact that the remainder of the story has to be bought, kinda like computer share ware software, if you offer part free offer all free or offer nothing at all, thisi s not the right way to appeal to readers
I review lots of stroies month on this site, after what you did here, i seriously doubt i will ever review another story by you and if so, you know now what the rating will be, i am not freelaoding, but i despise the fact that you tease readers then tell them, "Hey folks, you want tosee the rest of the story. then buy it" this does not cut it with me and probably will not with most eaders on this site (4/10)
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- Replied by:
RichardStryker
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2005)
- Hi
Thanks for your frank views.
I've spent the day in negotiations with my publishers.
You can now get the whole story from my website at:
http://stryker.a1adultebooks.com/
Terms and Conditions apply - as they say.
It's the best I can do.
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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Don't get me wrong, the story was good, but it sucks that you put part of it here and the rest has to be bought!!! Shame on you! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2005)
- How is going to a "free" site freeloading? It just strikes me that you are using this site as a place to "spam" for your commercial work.
- Replied by:
RichardStryker
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2005)
- I'll talk to my publishers but as thousands have bought my stories without complaint I guess they will just call you a freeloader. We'll see.
- Replied by:
RichardStryker
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2005)
- See previous response to another review on how to get the rest of the story.
- Replied by:
RichardStryker
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2005)
- On issues of spam you'll have to revert to the editor of this site. I simply submit a story text with links to them and they post what they want - as they left the links in I have to assume they condone this - and I note others do the same.
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| Reviewer:
RichardStryker
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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Hi everyone
I am the author of this story and I wanted to bring to your attention that I spend a lot of time writing a story like this. If you;ve ever tried writing a 25000 word story you will understand this. You only have a fraction of the whole story on this site.
In posting here, I'm offering you all the chance to read some of what I write in the hope that some of you will pick up on the link at the end of this story and want to support my efforts.
Whether you do or don't do so will largely determine whether I post any more of my stuff here. I sure as hell aint gonna keep on writing for free if I don't get supported for my efforts - and I don't just want flowery words!
Having posted The Inheritance and Kelly's Training a short while ago I have to say that real support for my stories (out of over 14,000 readers for the free stories) has been less than what I would require to write anything further for this site. (7/10)
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