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My Introduction Author: Shaylea
(Added on Aug 20, 2005) (This month 49162 readers) (Total 59472 readers)
A teenage girl finds herself an unexpected witness to the punishment of her best friend's bad big brother by his father. She doesn't realise he knows it, and has a few plans of his own as far as she is concerned.

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Highest Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: Clepsidra (Edit) Rating: Aug 18, 2007
I canŽt remember if IŽve already sen you a mail or something, so, just in case, IŽll write an review.
I love this story. I got most of it memorized. I think RyanŽs characterization is great - I just wish he had cried, but, oh well - and his submission is really hot. And the ending was a nice touch. Great work. (9/10)

Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: Aug 22, 2005
I have to agree with Rocky and Carrieanne about being stilted. Most of the story was punishment noises and not real quality. (4/10)

Reviewer: Rocky (Edit) Rating: Aug 21, 2005
Perhaps a bit stilted, but overall a good description of the goings-on. I'd like to see where this is going, and my reconsider my score after another chapter or two. (7/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Aug 20, 2005
The story read rather stilted not the least bit exciting with just a bunch of punishment noises. I cannot imagine where you are going with this. (4/10)

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