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Beach Bums
Author: julie<->julia
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(Added on Aug 17, 2005)
(This month 57016 readers) (Total 82565 readers) |
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Two ladies have very different opinions on what can be considered acceptable beach-wear and one attempts to forcibly impose her views, abusing her position as beach life-guard. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Delicious back and forth chat between two women not completely averse to the art of erotic teasing.
But will it stop there? Who knows, maybe there's more to come, even after all this time.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Yoru
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Sep 6, 2005 |
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The story made me smile. it's funny and hot.
nice work.
P.S: In my opinion exaggerations (like Engineer meant) in an erotic story don't hurt (quite the opposite). (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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Very clever and creative. Loads of fun! There are few things in life better than a wet transparent thong bikini (on the right girl of course). I just wanna know where this beach is located!!! (9/10)
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Engineer
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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The idea is great, and there are fascinating passages. However, I had been disturbed by frequent exaggerations which make the tale to me unbelievable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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they do not get any better then this, i real hope you plan to add more chapters (10/10)
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