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The Cheerleader Coach
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jul 23, 2005)
(This month 15543 readers) (Total 32170 readers) |
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A cheerleader coach goes to an adult book store to get items to get herself off only to find one of her black studies running the counter. She is blackmailed into submission by her and others as well as having to watch her cheerleading squad follow her decline. Part 1 of what I hope to be many. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
dimwit
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Mar 28, 2012 |
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id like to see a 2nd chapter of this one. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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Rocky
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Jul 24, 2005 |
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Thanks for finally using quotation marks. However, the story is still filled with typos, and the plot is fairly unbelievable. Not my genre, which probably contributed to the score. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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please keep it going, it is real good so far (9/10)
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