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Dave and Cindy
Author: Kanashin
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(Added on Jul 13, 2005)
(This month 17892 readers) (Total 50283 readers) |
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Dave calls his sister Cindy to discuss his obsessions at the request of his analyst Stacy. Things quickly get out of hand as Cindy takes advantage of the situation. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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Interesting story, sometimes little slow. Be careful not to exagerate. No man will be able to get 100 kicks in his balls in such a short time... (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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needs word and it offered nothing new, exciting or hot (5/10)
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johnboy
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Jul 21, 2005 |
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look forward to part 2 (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Jul 16, 2005 |
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I'm not normally into femdom stories, but this was well told. Reminded me somewhat of a VP Viddler story. Hopefully there will be part two, and three, and... (8/10)
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crickette
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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I loved reading Dave and Cindy. It was different and held my attention. I guess honesty is not always the best policy. I look forward to Chpt. 2. (8/10)
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chooky_104
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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I enjoyed this story very much. Thanks. (7/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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Not much into the phone transcript stories. (5/10)
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mystymason
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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The story line is excellent. You have a overly naive younger brother, a wonderful betrayal by his therapist and a delightfully sadistic sister who is all too ready to make his dreams (nightmares?) come true. His degrading fall into their clutches, however, was a little too swift for my taste; I like cruelty dragged out and savored. While I am definitely looking forward to the next episode, I would prefer to have the story delivered in a more narrative manner. Perhaps told through the eyes of his mother, hmm? (6/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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This read like a script, not a good thing at all. There were some fairly decent ideas (his fantasies) that might have been developed into a good lengthy story, but not in this format. I'd like to see you try to rewrite this into prose and not script speak, it probably would gain a lot more readers. (5/10)
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