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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Although I must agree with H Dean about the story having a distant feel to it, it's just that slight clinical aura that appeals to me most.
Very well executed story.
JJ (10/10)
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H Dean
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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A few more edits may have improved on some of the mistakes, which were minor. My main critisism would be the clinical nature of this tale. It seemed too dry and never gave much of a feel for anyone in the story. An example would be how the humiliation of the pet was glossed over - she recovered too quickly for the humiliation, or so it seemed. Overall an enjoyable read. I look forward to future installments. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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hard not to like a story like this :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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Although there was no plot, the descriptions of the pets and how they looked forward to their master's attention was kind of riveting. The animal like descriptions given to the human were right on. I read both chapters and would like to see a third with a male human dog added to mate with the woman dog. Just a suggestion. It was a very good read. Keep it up. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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Great premise, well-written, I liked it! (9/10)
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Ruby
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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An interesting tale. It would also make a good read from Gem's point of view. Switching her from a "puppy girl" to "pony girl" may prove an interesting challenge. Am looking forward to reading further adventures. (8/10)
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BDSgirl
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Jul 12, 2005 |
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mmm mmm i like that a lot! i have a yearning to be a pet. and this fills the fantasy nicely. it is a good 'short story'. enough detail to keep interest up, and doesnt try to be a novel.
so, when is the next chapter cumming, please? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
ssprin
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback. Any ideas on what could go in next chapter? I get my ideas from readers and my subs. Your ideas could form the basis for my next chapter.
Thanks
Steve
- Replied by:
BDSgirl
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Master S, i tried to email You, but it wouldnt go, and i tried to message You, but You arent a member it says! could You please join the library so i may write to You?
thank You
- Replied by:
ssprin
(Edit) (Jul 13, 2005)
- Try me under ssprin. That is the name I registered under on the forum.
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| Reviewer:
petleah
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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Coming from another pet, this is a wonderful story that coincides with much of my life with my Master. I could feel everything both Owner and pet went through and while I would prefer more detail and complex writing rather than a diary entry, I highly enjoyed it and would love to read the next chapter(s)! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ssprin
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback. Any ideas on what could go in next chapter? I would love to get some ideas/information from a human pet about your daily life. I get my ideas from readers and my subs. Your ideas could form the basis for my next chapter.
Thanks
Steve
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| Reviewer:
ga400us
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable and well written. (9/10)
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crimsonkiss69
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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This was incrediable made me so wet i couldnt stop reading...It made my blood boil with excitement for more.... I cannot wait to read the next part. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ssprin
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback.Glad it made you wet. The idea of owning a pet makes me hard. Any ideas on what could go in next chapter? I get my ideas from readers and my subs. Your ideas could form the basis for my next chapter.
Thanks
Steve
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