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Millie's Memorable Holiday
Author: BZ
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(Added on Jul 10, 2005)
(This month 89024 readers) (Total 133386 readers) |
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The story of a young city girl who learns to accept a new life on the ranch. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
J R Quilcon
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Mar 31, 2010 |
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I've enjoyed this story for years. It could have millie having cum a few times, but it still is really erotic in setting and detail. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
millymooe
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Dec 16, 2008 |
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mmmmmmmmoooooooo!
Delicious story and apart from the poor fate for the cows, it is one of my constant fantasies.
I worked at the Sexperimental Farm Laboratory (Google it?) for 5 years and luckily for me, my Contract ended and I was released. But still miss the Dairy.
Thank you BZ.
Milly mooe(s) a lot still. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
cymbidia
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Jan 3, 2006 |
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Good work! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spitman
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Jul 24, 2005 |
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There have been a lot of stories out there with a similar theme. This one has some original elements, but the ideas had more promise than appeared in the actual story. Including Chapter 3 it still needed more development and a denoument, but I would encourage this writer to stick with the subject. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2005)
- Details, details that seems to be my recurring problem, I've tried fleshing out the stories but, when I reread them, they read to me like the fluff you add to a 500 word composition when you only have 400 words written. However, I will consider writing an epilogue.
BZ
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| Reviewer:
crimsonkiss69
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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this had me intriqued I long for a continuation , when will that occur? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- The third and final part was e-mailed yesterday I hope it doesn't disappoint.
B.Z.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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A promising beginning, but that is all we get: the promise. If the author can deliver on that promise, it may warrant revising this rating. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- I'm glad you liked the story so far, part 2 is already on line and I just e-mailed the final part yesterday.
B.Z.
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