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An Unexpected Visit Author: Pallidan
(Added on Jul 7, 2005) (This month 16684 readers) (Total 31664 readers)
Mother shows up at son house after his marriage to see how he is doing only to gets the surprise of her life and afterwards.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
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Reviewer: rebelfan1 (Edit) Rating: Aug 4, 2005
Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)

Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: Jul 9, 2005
I have to say that was much better written and only once did the author mention the phrase. Much improved. (7/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jul 8, 2005
the story was good, but the synopisis let me a bit confused (7/10)

Reviewer: kring (Edit) Rating: Jul 8, 2005
Continue this one. I like it. What about some body modiciations on Amanda ? (8/10)

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