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How They Became One
Author: Master S
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(Added on Jun 28, 2005)
(This month 68536 readers) (Total 78716 readers) |
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The story of how a Dom and a sub met and became a D/s couple. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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just great (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jun 29, 2005 |
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You've created a well-written and well-plotted story. It's deliberately paced, very believable, and open to continuation. The device of alternating points of view is a time honored story telling technique but you must always be careful to balance it's value in adding depth to the story against the danger of becoming repetitious. You seem to have handled it well. (10/10)
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