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The Sure Bet
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 25, 2005)
(This month 13377 readers) (Total 25886 readers) |
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A girl makes a bet in school that she can turn another girl mother and aunt into her slaves. The bet has a nice reward. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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not as great as most but still a very good read, but no author i have ever rread is a 9 or 10 with every story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
rilawild
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Jul 9, 2005 |
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I really enjoyed the basic concept and the story has real potential, like other Palladin stories. It just needs a bit more development. I agree with Mr. Pete that perhaps if you spent more time on fewer stories they'd be great. Your imagination certainly isn't lacking. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Jun 25, 2005 |
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I read the whole story so I could give an "honest" review, but I knew already before I started that the premise of the story would be great, but the story would be underdeveloped with grammatical errors and dialogue without quotation marks. Why? That's the typical Palladin experience I've had, and Palladin did not disappoint (but only in that sense). I just don't get it. Why write so many mediocre stories when you could spend the extra time to give us a few great ones?! (5/10)
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