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A Night at the Movies
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 11, 2005)
(This month 11405 readers) (Total 26847 readers) |
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Mother and daughter decide to go to an adult theatre while hubby is away. Their interest in the movie becomes a reality. |
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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I liked reading, A Night at the Movies. Not exactly what I would call your typical mother and daughter bonding moment but to each his own. I liked the plot very much. Brought back a memory or two :)
Still grammatical errors, the same kind you made in, Black Mistress, White Family I believe it was called. Alot of the time the spell check or grammar check will not pick up on it, if it is spelled correctly despite how it is used. My advice, ask at least one other person to proof-read it for you. I saw a big improvement from the other story I mentioned of yours, although I don't know which was publishd first. It had a steady pace. To me, the ending felt unfinishd but that is probably just me. Overall, it was an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 11, 2005 |
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it was an enjoyable read, always a good story when mom and daughter are toether for fun (7/10)
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