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Whoring my Hos and a Bitch
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 3, 2005)
(This month 17804 readers) (Total 31176 readers) |
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A black teen boys takes over the life of a white teacher and her husband. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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despite other reviewers i did enjoy the story, not as good as some of your other but still good (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
feelfree2mailme
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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A very hot and sexy story.
I liked it.
Many mistakes but still.
And yes please go slow, I think the events were hapeening too fast.
I hope there is more humilitation to come. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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Once again, this guy shows his lack of ability by failing to use any quotation marks. My suggestion: Take a fifth grade English class. He comes up with some interesting concepts, but so far, everything I've read by this person was a waste of time. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Again the ending of each chapter is getting old. I suggest that the author just write one liong chapter instead of combining them with questions in the middle. (5/10)
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