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The Hooker Fantasy
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 3, 2005)
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A black hooker turns the tables on a white female domme and her mother. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 13, 2006 |
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not as good as most of yourworks (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Masterdesire
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Spelling needs some work. Character basis, Who the hell is Donna? More background needed. Like on the 6ft amazon , or the housekeeper. Plot is good. Needs fine tuning. Please separate Chapters like other authors to avoid confusion and better formulate you storyline.. Will check back . But a good job none the less. (5/10)
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