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The Limo Ride
Author: Christy
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(Added on Mar 19, 2005)
(This month 50903 readers) (Total 66847 readers) |
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A young girl on prom night shares her experience of taken advantage of in the back of a limo. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Mar 22, 2005 |
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Fair. Not a bad rape fantasy, realistic enough to be believable.
Your grammar and spelling are adequate, if a little stilted in places.
One note: a PAIR of thongs is footwear. A thong is underwear.
Otherwise, unexceptional. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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not very well written. pretty boring, actually. there needs to be a lot more character development, more insight into exactly what is going on in her head, and, of course, a good edit is required to get rid of the spelling and grammatical errors. (4/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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Not much here, way too much detail and not very much heat. The characters seem to be made out of cardboard and they are boring to boot. Better editing might have improved this story's chances. I'll pass on any further installments. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Master_chris
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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I love this story, the way the plots moves alone, it even reminders me of my prom night then I was at College :-). I wish there is more to this story. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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I enojyed reading it, it was diddrent then most high school genre stories (7/10)
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