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    The Twins
    
    Author: Roave Somagi
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    (Added on Feb 22, 2005)
            (This month 50524 readers) (Total 60123 readers) | 
   
   
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    One twin has the best lover in the world...so good, in fact, that he shares her with his twin brother. | 
   
 
 
   
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    Average 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    jip
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    Feb 21, 2006 | 
   
   
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        The story is nice and exiting. We are not in a litterature contest here and important is the story itself. Would like some more adventures with the twins and the girl. What about the wife? Will she join them? (8/10) 
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    Belly
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    Feb 27, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Poorly written.  I recommend the writer take a basic writing course. (3/10) 
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    Breannefun
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    Feb 23, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Once again the ugly head of grammarical error attacks.  It's obvious from the names of not only the characters, but the author, that English may not be a primary language.  In any event, the plot was kind of fun and interesting.  Enough to get me going.  It was just the errors that distyracted from the overall. (5/10) 
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