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With My Wife In Control
Author: Peter Allow
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(Added on Feb 8, 2005)
(This month 52063 readers) (Total 71773 readers) |
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Jane takes the opportunity to turn her husband Pete into a submissiv husband, to please her and her boyfriend Bart. The surprise of what she proposed he never oposed, instead he was no longer just a servant he also had to serve them sexualy with a complete humiliation. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jun 20, 2005 |
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Wanted to mark it higher, as it was potentially a very highly charged scenario. Keep writing about these types of situations. They hit a hot bottom with many. (5/10)
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jbowler65
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Feb 8, 2005 |
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We felt there were a couple problems with the story. First, the story needs more detail and background to help the reader understand why he's submitting. Just stating it like a fact doesn't draw the reader in. Second, how you formatted the conversations needs some help. Using quotes is preferrable to dashes. A proofreader can help. (3/10)
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