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Penalties
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Feb 1, 2005)
(This month 55802 readers) (Total 78866 readers) |
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Barry had a secret fantasy that involved prolonged teasing and subsequent denial. He never revealed it to anyone until he saw an advertising leaflet that promoted a tease and denial service. Poor Barry, he just had to call. This is a story in three parts and all parts will be posted here. This story will also be published in a collection of short stories at some future time. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 30, 2005 |
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not big into femdom but this was good (7/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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Excellent base for the story. A bit confusing at the beginning but after reading the story it made sense. Excellent description. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ropebinder
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Apr 11, 2005 |
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Carmenica Diaz is an excellent author. I've read several of her snippets, and they're all good. This story line is believable and erotic. The prose flow well, and I love the internal struggle and mind games.
The reader should be aware that all her stories are merely advertisement meant to induce us to buy her books. She never posts more than a taste of any story, as far as I can tell. I don't fault her for trying to make money off her writing (she is good enough), but it feels deceptive on a site that prides itself as free access. Just my opinion.
I recommend this story highly. (8/10)
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kden31
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Feb 4, 2005 |
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fantastic story..kept me at the edge of ummm..my seat (9/10)
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abitbent
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Feb 3, 2005 |
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Carmen's got my number i have to shamefully admit. I've not read anything she's written that wasn't short of amazing. I'll sleep like a baby tonight. *sly grin* (10/10)
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byrongc
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Feb 2, 2005 |
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Really a fun story, well written and leaves room to continue on with a second part, if you wanted. Would be a good story to give to a g/w wife to give her the idea that teasing and chastity belts could be fun
Thank you (9/10)
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makito
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Feb 2, 2005 |
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Carmenica's writing is gentle but very exciting. Enough is left to the reader's imagination to allow for one's particular button to be pressed. A story worth continuing. A writer worth reading. (10/10)
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ongeduldje
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Feb 1, 2005 |
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i think it's a pity They didn't lock him in without coming... :-)
But.. great story!!!!! (9/10)
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