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Susan
Author: Ededas
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(Added on Jan 24, 2005)
(This month 23190 readers) (Total 54495 readers) |
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The first chapter in a story detailing a young woman's journey through the world of consensual bdsm. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Very well written and highly arousing, because of the excellently described setting.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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2 for 2 (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jan 28, 2005 |
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This piece took me away allowing me to become completely engrossed in it, a thing that very few authors can do. Very well written I can only hope that there is much more to come as I am intrigued as to which way this tale will turn out. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mstressXXX
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Jan 26, 2005 |
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My start in the bdsm arena was being a sub to a
very loving, yet demanding dominant. Reading
your story brought back my early treasured memories of my time discovering what bdsm and
being submissive was truly about. Well-written,
and a very enjoyable read. Please continue
writing future chapters of this story so that I can hear about her continual journey in bdsm. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Jan 26, 2005 |
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After struggling through the first few long paragrapns, I found myself totally absorbed in this well written piece of erotica. It's a well done, high quality, piece of teasing, punishing and pleasing. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Ededas
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2005)
- Thanks for taking the time and trouble to review this, and I can't really say more than thanks again for the vote of confidence
I'll have a look at those paragraph lengths. Trouble is that sometimes I get so into what I'm writing that I tend to miss the technical bits.
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Jan 24, 2005 |
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This isn't really a 'story', but more of an episode in the lives of a loving bdsm couple.(Maybe there's more to come?) It's a scenario like we’ve all read time and time before in many bdsm stories. The author’s style—erotic but not cheap or crass, combined with several interesting concepts within the story, and the exceptional attention to detail, in my opinion, puts this one in the top shelf category.
Only, for people like me, who are in not in imperial measurement, descriptions rather than actual measurements might have worked better? Every time I read ‘inches’ if just kind of jarred me.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Ededas
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2005)
- Thank you for your time and trouble I'm very flattered. You are correct it is, in fact, the first chapter of a story that I have nearly finished. I will remember your comments about metric v's imperial.
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