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Pub Games
Author: melody
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(Added on Dec 14, 2004)
(This month 52857 readers) (Total 70168 readers) |
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A wife takes her revenge on the woman who fucked her husband. A follow on story from Maid for Pleasure where Melody has to take her medicine. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 22, 2006 |
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average at best (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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The story was good, if short, but somehow the synopsis gave me the idea Melody was going to have her revenge on someone else; it must be too close to dinner time here. (shaking his head) (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 23, 2004 |
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Well, I certainly think this deserves better than a '4'. If not for the very odd use of the word 'fanny', I'd've gone for eight. Inventive, though a bit quick. I was hoping for more 'foreplay' before they got down to brass tacks. I do agree that eighty would've crippled the poor girl. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cokera
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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"Nice even eighty". I think not. But anyway the story shows a creative attitude for sure. Please continue. Revenge is the sweetest thing a woman can enjoy. I have been seen similiar scenes, alas not quite extreme. (4/10)
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