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The HoneyMoon Author: Athenna
(Added on Dec 14, 2004) (This month 51729 readers) (Total 67559 readers)
Its a story an Indian Couple, out for trackking and camping in Mount abu hills. She is Dominant and He is her lover and submissive. Its a description of how they enjoy their trip throughout.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: Ruby (Edit) Rating: Mar 1, 2005
Wow! What a hot little story with two lovers who are so intimate. These characters are worthy of more stories about them. As a reader, I say, "Please Mistress, may I have some more." (8/10)

Reviewer: somewriter (Edit) Rating: Mar 1, 2005
An interesting start, I hope you continue to write more in future Athenna. (9/10)

Reviewer: Athenna (Edit) Rating: Mar 1, 2005
Thanks Ranai! I shall try to continue!! :D (10/10)

Reviewer: Ranai (Edit) Rating: Mar 1, 2005
A powerful and sexy scene.
Chains. Mmmmm! Lovely.
Beautiful description of how the outdoor setting influences the scene in terms of space and sensations. Imaginative use of darkness and light – visually, mentally, figuratively. The text plays with distance and closeness; silence and sound; cold and heat; hesitation, invitation, submission. The changes back and forth between the internal perspectives of the two characters are elegantly achieved.
It would definitely be interesting to learn more about this couple and their trip. (8/10)

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