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Bethany's Sins Author: Rebel Snowdrop
(Added on Dec 3, 2004) (This month 73965 readers) (Total 111504 readers)
Bethany steals millions from a business with connections to the torture trade. Their bounty hunter uses their products to lay a trap at a church, where she suffers for her sins.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Feb 2, 2006
good story, sometimes a little heavy in wording, but overall good (8/10)

Reviewer: Ruby (Edit) Rating: Feb 12, 2005
Yummy punishment for a naughty girl. Bethany certainly seems to be getting what she deserves and more. (9/10)

Reviewer: longrover (Edit) Rating: Jan 6, 2005
Good story, well done, liked the organ, but too many words for the action, I'm afraid. I've read the rest and the balance is much better. I didn't take the contest constraint into consideration originally, since that's part of it. +2 points. (9/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Dec 21, 2004
The bare story for the contest was quite good, but as mentioned below (certainly due to the contest constraints of size) the story needed more. I am pleased to see you have added more, and hope you will choose to continue. Very well written, creative (especially the organ, and the poisoned soup) and fun. (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Dec 4, 2004
i am waiting to see where you go next with this (8/10)

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