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The Slavery of Gloria
Author: Samantha Kou
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(Added on Oct 6, 2004)
(This month 152157 readers) (Total 255890 readers) |
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A studious asian high schooler is blackmailed by her fellow female classmate and eventually comes to accpet her new role as a submissive slave. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Jul 14, 2011 |
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this story doesn't make any sense at all.
Apparently this story is written from the perspective of a Korean lesbian who had a crush on a blonde girl and all the struggles that she goes through in a unrequited and perhaps secret love affair. Although the story is narrated in third person, it could easily be narrated through a first person. As a matter of fact, that was the way I read it, because that way the story is more convincing. The people who got turned off because the way Gloria seems to accept being blackmailed too quickly and the giant leap of faith in the hurtling transformation of a studious high school student to a submissive sex slave--well perhaps you need a change of perspective. If a reader chooses to take Gloria's words at a superficial level, one gets those contradictions. What this story is in actuality is a wish-fulfillment. The beginning two chapters were mere fabrications by Gloria, that was what she wanted to happen, and the rest of the chapters presents her true self, and what she desires. The blackmailing is mere a plot to shift the object of desire onto the object. What in psychology calls projection. A person may have strong feelings for a certain object, yet he in stead insists that the object is actually infatuated with him and tells others that the object trapped him into it. Gloria in actuality since the very beginning is indeed infatuated with white bonde girls so much so that she was worshipping them, and that in turn induces self-hatred and self-deprecation at not being able to approach them.
Despite all the racial undertone to the story, there actually doesn't exist any ground to look at this story as such. It's merely the imagination of the narrator, and a perverted expression of resentment of unrequited lesbian love.
Despite the promise of the first chapter, the rest of the chapters disastrously drop the ball on delivering anything other than a farcical psychoanalysis on the author herself/himself.
If the story doesn't make sense to you, that's because the author's pyschology is totally fucked, and it would make more sense if you the reader read it as though a piece of literature excerpted from a pyschology textbook on the prognostications of mental illness. (4/10)
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azrlg17
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Apr 6, 2008 |
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Damn it, the story started out great. But then the author somehow snapped, brought in a 14 year old who was sent home NAKED thus pretty much ensuring that Jessica gets caught and sent to jail as a sex offender for a while. Do you really think a 14 year old girl can make it unseen naked if she is not an immediate neighbor? And why did she shave the head of Gloria. In the unlikely case she isn't caught because of Tammy (realy unlikely) Gloria's parents will find out that something funny is going on with their daughter. The story started great and then went completely to hell in chapter 8. A shame really. The first 6 chapters would have been more of an 8 or 9.
(5/10)
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themaneloco
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Mar 8, 2006 |
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Fantastic. Just the kind of story I like, keep up the excellent work. (10/10)
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shred97
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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The character development makes this particularly interesting. It is enjoyable erotic fiction. (9/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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I'm enjoying the story so far. Lots of good humiliation scenes. (7/10)
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ROBERTAR
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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Dear Samantha, Love the story.I am new to this site and this is one of the best I have read so far.I liked the foot worship and being treated like a dog. I am glad you got rid of the 14 year old to young.Can not wait for more. ROBERTA (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Aug 16, 2005 |
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The story was excellent but the introduction of the 14 year old sort of turned me off to the story.
(7/10)
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PLP21
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Aug 16, 2005 |
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very good waiting for the next three chapters, the Walmart scene was especially tasty..... (8/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 15, 2005 |
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Thought the transition to acceptance a little too abrupt, but otherwise well done. Little too heavy on the doggie and feet for my particular taste, but still some very good other moments. (8/10)
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Shadowdeep
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Jul 20, 2005 |
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Incredible. I've been waiting a long time for a story like this. Great character develpment, scene development, inner tension, and humiliation. Some of the concepts are borowed from other works, but what makes this story work is that it has a beleivability factor that most stories of this genre lack. Please write more! (10/10)
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Arcege
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Jun 27, 2005 |
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Great humiliation. Good character development, story line. (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Mar 3, 2005 |
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It's nice to see a proper studious asian girl realize she's a slut at heart. It goes against the stereotype. I especially liked when she tried tried to seduce the mom by sucking her toes. (8/10)
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RhondaLee
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Feb 28, 2005 |
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The slave is too willing. There is hardly any training or torture needed to be done on her to make her a slave or a submissive. In other words, from her being an ordinary person to a submissive, there is a gap. There should be a series of torture on her to make her a slave. (7/10)
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Parker
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Feb 25, 2005 |
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Very nice work. I look forward to seeing how the story turns out. (9/10)
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buskeyTR
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Feb 23, 2005 |
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Samantha has started one of the best f/f dom and humil stories I have ever read. I hope that this story goes about 100 more chapters, it's that good.
(10/10)
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himind
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Dec 13, 2004 |
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Lovely,lovely story.The way she can't control her urges and the way each scene develops is very good.Hope to see a lot more of this soon Samantha! (9/10)
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vickytv
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Nov 23, 2004 |
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i definitely enjoy the girl-girl dom aspect. Especially enjoy the forced foot worship! good job! (9/10)
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jack10mile
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Oct 13, 2004 |
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Great imagination, terrific pacing. Want to see how far Gloria will really go. (9/10)
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Xaphan45
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Oct 11, 2004 |
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Very nice story. Lovbe the way Gloria gets manipulated and her body keeps betraying her. Really looking forward to much more. Excellent detail and pacing. (9/10)
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dreamster
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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A most delightful read, well written and with a nice sense of pace and sexual tension. Many thanks. (9/10)
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rlh7234
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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great story!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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i found it to be enjoyable, the details where good, i hope there is more to come (8/10)
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ms2bused
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Without a doubt, one of the most thrilling and sensual stories I have read here! GAWD! How totally involved in the story I became that I came to truly envy Gloria immensely! Hope there are many more sequels and would relish it that much more if she could include Gloria suffering teasing/orgasm denial almost permanently!
A new and avid reader,
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien) (10/10)
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Brooking
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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A really good story, and i look forward to the next chapter i hope will come*s* (8/10)
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Breannefun
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Pretty much the same plot as Trouble with Tracy, but most definately a new twist. I'm interested to see where this goes. Asian girls are always so pretty and demure. There was only one grammatical error I saw, where a few words were reveresed. Descriptions were acceptable. (9/10)
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tombomb
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Very nice story but needs some editing. Please continue with the plot. Thanks (10/10)
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