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Supporting My Girlfriend
Author: Peter Allow
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(Added on Oct 6, 2004)
(This month 54384 readers) (Total 70983 readers) |
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Marvin lives a submissiv life together with his Girlfriend Georgia, were he has his own cage. One day he looses his job and has no other way to support his girlfriend except providing sexual services for appointments Georgia finds for him. This leads him into a path of sexual activities he never even could imagine. |
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| Reviewer:
makito
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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Excellent creativity. Needs a little editing. Thanks! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
dreamster
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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I feel a little kinder than bisarah but only because I appreciate the effort obviously involved but I have to confess I couldnt finish it. My heart sank when I read early in the story (I paraphrase)."Even in her high heels she was shorter than me.. she looked me straight in the eyes". I suspect English is not your first language but if it is please try and respect it. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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This is the second story that I have "tried" to read but because of the confusing punctuation, grammar, and mispelling, I cannot even finish it! I will give you the same suggestion I gave the other author: buy yourself a grammar and punctuation book and learn how to structure a sentence. If you want to be a writer, do it right! Your story premise might have promise, but ... who would know! (2/10)
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