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From a Husband to a Housekeeper
Author: mwmsissy
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(Added on Sep 7, 2004)
(This month 25470 readers) (Total 58399 readers) |
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I am changed from a husband to a sissy slave by my wife and her new man. I wind up as a maid in his house. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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A good concept and story but some work needs to be done to explain the maids near instant acceptance of his position. Some work could also be done on formatting and grammar. (6/10)
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Rocky
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Sep 10, 2004 |
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Sorry, but one of my major turn-offs in writing is bad formatting, particularly when page-long paragraphs consist of several people talking. Whenever someone new speaks, there should be a paragraph break. Perhaps this was caused by the format in which it was posted, and the original text looked fine, but once I saw these huge paragraphs with multiple quotations, I shut it down. I'm assuming the author wrote the original text using a word processor, then converted it to a .txt file for posting. When you do that, you should also check your final product before you post. I know I've had that problem, but caught it before I transmitted the text. My suggestion is to revise, re-post and then I'll reevaluate. (5/10)
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studmaster58
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Sep 8, 2004 |
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This story was arousing and exciting to say the least. Every nuance involving feminination and humiliation was explored in this tale. I liked the presentation of this theme and the authors depiction of the story. Looking forward to part 2. (9/10)
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