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Retribution
Author: robdanob
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(Added on Aug 20, 2004)
(This month 9664 readers) (Total 23120 readers) |
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Evil pair get pay back. |
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 23, 2004 |
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A decent premise, but the shoddy editing did it in. Plenty of typos, broken sentences and gargantuan paragraphs made reading this short story a painful experience. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
robdanob
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2004)
- Thanks for the review.
I agree completely with your comments on the editing and general technical content.This is my first attempt at writing and I am pleased that the story itself was well recieved.All I need to do now is brush up on my typing, general finishing, presentation and of course spelling.Thanks again, look out for more in the future.
Robdanob
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