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Sara
Author: Charles E. Campbell
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(Added on Jul 23, 2004)
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The story of a young slave's quest to be completely and totally enslaved in steel. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Read this a couple of years ago, but never rated/reviewed it, my apologies.
First class account of a female sub's need to get pierced and marked.
Very well done.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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very consistant with all your stories, nice to see that (9/10)
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BigCat
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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Heavy stuff. Well done. (9/10)
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LordVetinari
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Quite good, in my opinion. Well worth the read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lahrling
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Aug 12, 2005 |
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Ok. I figure that since I didn't have to go back and re-read this story after eight months without an update, I should rate this story highly and give it a few lines.
No higher praise can I give: the authour hasn't updated this continuing story since January, and it made enough of an impression on my long-term memory that just the latest chapter brought it back to me.
And it's not 'a perfect fit.' The story starts after the first-person sub has been with her Master for some time. I like Capture. Of course, it does have Shaving, Piercing, and Marking, which all strongly appeal to me, but it's not the strongest appeal to my twisted tastes.
The author makes commendable use of the English language. It may be kinda sad that so few perverts can be bothered to submit Clean Copy, but there it is. When the standard is email sort of typos, good clean no 'it's' for 'its' English prose is praiseworthy.
This story could be improved, IMO, by further detailing the sub's introduction to Her Master. But that would be tailoring a chapter to the critic, and is usually a mistake.
Y'know, some folks say that mixed signals are a harsher torture than whips an' chains? I'm not sure I believe that. (9/10)
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Sailor861
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Aug 12, 2004 |
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As a longtime aficionado of steel bondage and piercings, this story is a most welcome addition to the library. Very well written, excellent detail and narrative made this a real page-turner (or down-key presser, whichever). I read it in one take and I look forward to Mr. Campbell's next story. The style reminds me of that of the late Frank E. Campbell, of HoM Productions, in the late-1980s. I wonder if they are related? (9/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Jul 27, 2004 |
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well written. I have enjoyed this uiverse and good to see the characters once again with the addition of Sara to this universe. I hope that you will continue this story line. I like seeing Sir Campbell's domme character and would like to see more of Him as well. (9/10)
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bernie
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Jul 26, 2004 |
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excellent enslavement story.... details were very good and realism was awesome.....
WOuld love to read how all that wonderful steel and U clamps are used further on slave!!!! (10/10)
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craftygirl
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Jul 24, 2004 |
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I enjoyed reading this. (8/10)
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Kira
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Jul 24, 2004 |
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Great story, fine written.
I love the heavy piercings and hope You will continue the story. With like this piercings a lot of torture is possible, keep coming. (10/10)
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bisarah
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Jul 24, 2004 |
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While the breast piercing made me feel a little icky, this was one of the best written stories i have read in some time. Very compelling ... Will you continue it? And will the Master have her head hair removed? (10/10)
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La Toya
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Jul 24, 2004 |
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I look forward to reading more about Sara's fun (10/10)
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jth215
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Jul 23, 2004 |
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Great start. Can't wait for the next chapters.Let's hope she goes back to the salon for the rest of her hair...
Thanks (9/10)
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