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The Hidden Face 2 - The Rubber Clinic
Author: Den Sethos
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(Added on Jul 2, 2004)
(This month 127707 readers) (Total 170414 readers) |
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Barbara arrives at the Rubber Clinic where she will be modified and trained to become the perfect lesbian slave. The first few chapters do not contain much sex scenes because they are more focused on Barbara's modification. However, there will be more sex scenes after these chapters (lesbian and machine). |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 27, 2012 |
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The premise of this story was great, but why was it so rushed. This story could have been a 10 if time was taken to tell us about the mistress, Barbara's background & so on. The procedures could have been played out longer with more emotion from Barbara. The sex, her new body descriptions & so much more could have been heightened & extended to make this story so much better. Even more chapters leading us thru her sexual & submissive training would have been great. Maybe ending with her new Mistress taking her home & that's when she finds her new owner is her best friend or sister or boss. The point is, this story had a great premise, but lacked depth & detail. However, I did enjoy it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kinkyballgag
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Mar 2, 2009 |
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it wasnt the best. but it had me reading till the end... i personally would have enjoyed being there in the first place ^^ (7/10)
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emmacd
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Dec 19, 2004 |
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IT aroused my interest a great deal Emma (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Aug 1, 2004 |
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although i enjoyed reading about barbara's regime of body modifications and there are many elements here that I find exciting there are a great many errors in grammar or to put it more precisely proper word order. Perhaps english your first language is not? That is the only reason I didn't give this story a higher rating. (7/10)
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ms2bused
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Jul 4, 2004 |
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Very slow in starting but thorough in description and setting the stage! Chapter 9 finally produced sensually exotic scenarios but the promise of the contents of Chapter 10 seem to be extremely promising! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 3, 2004 |
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This has everything i enjoy in a story, i like the Dr. series also, always a new adventure, and rubber, that make it HOT, HOT, Hot
Barbara is in for areal toughtime, kinda reminds me of Janets Ordeal, maybe it will follow along the same general path, but different enough that no ideas are taken from it (10/10)
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