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Top Boss
Author: littlebro_969
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(Added on Jul 2, 2004)
(This month 132563 readers) (Total 263853 readers) |
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Top executive in banking company secret life being abused and humiliated. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 9, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the story, it was not quite as good as your first one
i am not sure yet where the blackmail espect comes in, but tammy lynn seems to be willing to do anything her mistress asks, i only wish the chapters where longer
Thisihas the making of a great femdom story can't wait to read more as they are posted
All your stories easly rate a 8 plus i just wish you would make the chapters longer, i have never ead a bad story you have posted (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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A little more creativity in the writing is needed in this short story. Not alot of flow and the ideas are not brought forth in any detail. (5/10)
Update: The story still has some problems with the writing, but the ideas behind the story are good. Keep it up and your English skills will improve. (5/10)
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bracemaiden
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Aug 17, 2004 |
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I think that "Somewhat enjoyable. Acceptable writing skills" is quite appropriate. It seems that the story is starting to heat up. But the author has the halted writing style of someone who is writing in a language that they are less than fluent at. At least it's easily understandable. (6/10)
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Engineer
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Jul 24, 2004 |
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The basic ideas and the plot are very promising, but the writing itself is without fire and grip. Positive: The author withstood the temptation to exaggerations and "erotic" but tasteless wording. (5/10)
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Jacen
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Jul 4, 2004 |
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Not long, but this is a good thing. I strongly suspect the author is not a native English speaker. Many sentances. In the Style O' Captain Kirk. Short and jerky. Like these: "She sat in there like an hour before the owner of the house came into the room. She knew she was the boss lady. Because she was an older lady. The lady walked in the room wearing this sexy black leather outfit. She looked at Tammy Lynn and she knew exactly why she was there" (5/10)
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