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Nipped in the Bud
Author: C
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(Added on Jul 2, 2004)
(This month 55120 readers) (Total 70243 readers) |
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Magic detective snares wicked, sexy succubi. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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May 19, 2005 |
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I enjoyed reading your story, Nipped in the Bud. It was a nice change of pace and I love agatha christie/mickey spillane type stories. The character's styles were not overplayed. The death of the succubus's was interesting too. Who would ever have thought you could die from......but if I had to go (smile.)The content was not as hard core or intense as most of the stories here but that by no means, means it was not good. Overall, the pace was steady. It slowed slightly in a few places put nothing major. The tone was low key but still good. I look forward to see if your detective has any more adventures. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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the rating say it all (1/10)
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