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When Coyote Met Misty
Author: C
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(Added on Jun 19, 2004)
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Coyote captures some Crinolinas, swiftest and prettiest of land fays. Who in the end will get the upper hand? |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Jun 24, 2004 |
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Heh. Funny, sexy, AND well written. A touch more care with grammar would be nice, but otherwise perfect. The whole "sexy fairy tale" bit is fun. Perhaps a touch greater explicitness would have been good too. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Comneno
(Edit) (Nov 23, 2004)
- Thanks for your kind words. This story is one I rather like myself, so I'm especially happy to see it appeal to someone else. I'm not sure, however, what brought on your criticism of the grammar.
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jun 21, 2004 |
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Alice in Wonderland lite and dark is the only way to describe this whimsical vignette with its eerie ending.The fays are an enchanting lot, well drawn using an economy of words. This entire world of the author is an amazing place and seems never to have a happy ending, just like some other world that I know. (8/10)
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