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Dear Diary
Author: rainydayz
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(Added on Jun 6, 2004)
(This month 17656 readers) (Total 38789 readers) |
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A woman finds out her dog can satisfy. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 29, 2006 |
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good story, the small remarks of other readers apart. A previous girlfriend of me has considered to have licked by her dog. The only reason she did not do it, was she was afraid that the dog would become a "vicious" one, the more that she was mother of 2 girls. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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a good story but with some re-phrasing and re-formatting and a good check through for gramtical errors then my rating will improve. hope the feed back helps. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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If you like bestiality, I think you'll find this a kick.
Criticisms: the author does commit the 'body betrayed me' sin. Also, a lot of run-on sentences in this story.
Personally, were I a woman and had done this sort of act, I would have a lot of conflict afterwards about whether or not I was raped by my dog or a willing participant. Also, although the reader was drawn into the narrative, we missed getting a moment of description about what the narrator-character looks like, her body type, things that are important to getting a visual. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kingcodez
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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I'm not in to beastality but it was pretty funny. Some grammatical errors but wierdly I actually liked it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 8, 2004 |
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beastiality does nothing for me (4/10)
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- Replied by:
GaryWilcox
(Edit) (Jun 9, 2004)
- You realy shouldn't review a story based on your own tastes, but on the merits of the story. Does the story have a flow, does it make sense? Is the grammar/writing on track, or could it do with an editor (or re-writer)?
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