|
|
|
|
Yes, Yasmin
Author: Jamec
|
|
(Added on May 6, 2004)
(This month 56647 readers) (Total 69583 readers) |
|
A man meets a woman for the first time and does it completely on her terms. |
Ratings and Reviews: |
Number
of Ratings: 3 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
33% |
67% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (7/10) |
Highest
Rating: (7/10) |
Lowest
Rating: (6/10) |
|
|
|
|
Reviewer:
crickette
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 2, 2004 |
|
I liked reading Yes, Yasmin. It was an interesting twist, at least for me. I liked the fact that she enjoyed her dominance over Jimmy rather than abusing it. Not all BDSM is raunchy and violent. Even though it was a dom/sub relationship, there was still respect. I also loved the fact that his only response, if he wanted to continue, was Yes, Yasmin. I do think the ending was a a little too erupt A little more conversation whether it be between the two or just her to herself would have been nice. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
Reviewer:
bracemaiden
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 13, 2004 |
|
The stroy was average - not much great, not anything horrible. (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
Reviewer:
abitbent
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 8, 2004 |
|
This story is light, and extremely short. The author has some good ideas here although they do seem a little typical, and the storyline so far is a quite predictable. Still good effort on the authors part. (6/10)
|
|
|