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The Feather Tease Girls
Author: neverman
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(Added on May 6, 2004)
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Two boys agree to play a tease game with some girls and one loses badly. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 22, 2005 |
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to short, but ok for femdon (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
robert216
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May 14, 2004 |
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Short, but hot story. I am sure many guys would love/hate to be in bobby's shoes! (8/10)
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lex ludite
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May 8, 2004 |
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There is nothing very original about this teen-age masturbatory fantasy. My guess is that English is not the author's native tongue, and it shows in the convoluted sentences, the problems with punctuation and the stilted phrases used by the "teenagers". The two males remind me of those "wild and crazy" guys from the old SNL show. I liked the ending, it sort of appealed to the submissive, masochistic side of my personality, but just barely. All in all it is not a bad first try, and I would encourage the author to take my comments seriously so that his next effort will be an improvement over this offering. (5/10)
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