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Slave to a Man Hater
Author: beatenboy
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(Added on Apr 5, 2004)
(This month 81918 readers) (Total 110549 readers) |
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The ad read: "Seeking genuinely cruel woman who would love to physically & mentally abuse & degrade a sincere, submissive, 36 year-old SWM." The woman who answered took him to depths of depravity he'd never imagined. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
dadthor
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Sep 26, 2008 |
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Plausible and engaging, great tale. thanks. (9/10)
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subglenn
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May 8, 2006 |
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All i can say is WOW (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tom_pb
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Aug 20, 2004 |
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nicely written - very erotic even considering the grossness of the topic. scat is a turn on to some and the author did a great job of describing one such person. (10/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jul 25, 2004 |
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Though scat is not really a fetsih of mine this story did explain it well. I would love to see the next part. (8/10)
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wrighter4u
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May 18, 2004 |
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This is a very well written story. One of the best. The imagination and story is a well deserved 10. Some writing errors maybe should prevent me from giving it a 10. I justify the 10 simply because it is one of the best I have read. I will search out and read other stories by this author. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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A bit extreme for my taste but well written. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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I loved this story very much. The subject matter not being everyone\'s thing, admittedly, however, the writing skills more than make up for it. Even if you have never personally been interested in scat or even male submission, this story is worth your time. The author put in admirable effort in outlining the characters and situations, so even the deatils that would be embarassingly unconvincing in other stories work very fine here. The lengthy flashback about the main character\'s childhood fantasies would ruin a good story in the hands of another author I imagine, but this one manages to pull it off and even the references to magazine-psychology theories work very well withing the contect of the story.
The language is rich and it is indeed a real pleasure to read a story written by someone who has admirable skills with words, managing not just to use a great deal of them, but to use them to excellent effect as well.
I especially have to point out: even though the story makes no compromises in the hardcore D/s department (there are even some dismissive smirks of scenesters and professional Doms), with over-the-top violence and other nasty things involved, the overall tone is well balanced with some great sense of humour, yet never falling into a cheap comedy mood. Some points in the story are equal parts hillarious and scary, which I think is a worthy achievement. I can only hope the author provides equally good sequels in following parts, although it\'s going to be difficult to increase the intensity with the bar being set very high with the first chapter. Some very minor grammar glitches, not really worth worrying about. (9/10)
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abitbent
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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Extremely well written. I really enjoyed this story despite scat being an extremely huge turn off. The author does a great job describing the main characters thoughts and feelings, which makes this a very realistic read, however the realism crashes and burns because the activities he\'s made to endure are somewhat over the top. Still, fantasies are fantasies. I would have given this story a 10, however as fate would have it, I found the dredded word \"Handiwork\" yet again. Be warned. (9/10)
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