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Captured
Author: Ca.H.
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(Added on Mar 23, 2001)
(This month 59794 readers) (Total 78111 readers) |
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She was kidnapped, used as a sex toy and treated as a slave. She found she was quite enjoying it. Written in the second person manner. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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Rating: (5.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
jonathan
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Apr 14, 2001 |
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I wasn't going to comment on this story except that I felt compelled to disagree with the previous reviewer. I suppose you could call it well written if your idea of well written is that it contains fewer than the average number of errors in grammar and punctuation, but there's more to a story than the mechanics.
First of all, in my opinion, second person stories suck and this one is no exception in that regard.
Secondly, there's nothing very interesting here. It's another overly long story about a single sexual encounter session. A girl is abducted, subjected to most of the usual stuff, then put back where she came from, only to discover (surprise!) that she liked it. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emu1072802@aol.com |
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Mar 28, 2001 |
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Well written (9/10)
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