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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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Looks as though Mandy gets far too much enjoyment, she has a very caring Mistress ... lucky thing.
Great story, which could have even more chapters added on an ad hoc basis. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Am a bit of a sucker for this kind of story. Loved it.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 18, 2006 |
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by biggest issue is that when i look at any story to rerad i look first at the synopsis, your was notthere, it is need to draw in readers, the codes alone mean nothing it would help if a short
synopsis was sued, better short then nonoe at all, at least with that readers a genenral idea of the story rather the n readibgit all the way through or part way through and making theirdecsion on that
like going to a resturant and see a steak listed, but no idesa what cut, what type or what else comes with it, and if it listed as a steak for $13.95 i want to know what i get with it and not have to ask the waiter (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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Just as we assumed to know all about Corporate's underbelly, yet another side is revealed.
More attention could have been paid to "Mandy" realizing that she was not alone but then her dilema of getting caught with her pants down, so to speak, adds to the tension.
A fine read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Mar 17, 2004 |
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I have to disagree with the first three reviewers -- this is the best story I've read from Anne Gray. I see that she has posted two longer stories to this site, but the short,hit-and-run is what I'm accustomed to seeing from her, and this is tops. Quite often her bondage (which is really what she's interested in, not S&M) is so intricate and detailed that I can't follow it, but not this time.I was a little disappointed that this seems to be a permanent kidnapping, but we can't have everything. Most of Anne's stories are written to a formula, and this one is the best example of that breed (mixed metaphor alert!). (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Anne Gray
(Edit) (Mar 17, 2004)
- Thank you for that and the other positive reviews but I can't have you "a little disappointed" so watch for the sequel which I will post soon. This notice should give certain prolific reviewers enough time to start thinking negatively as is usually their wont. Anne
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Curtis
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2004)
- (after part three added) This chapter was typical Anne Gray, and I didn't find it as 'special' as the first. Rated seperately, I'd've given it an '8'.
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Mar 15, 2004 |
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I enjoyed the story. I enjoy stories about female self-bondage, stories about F/f BD, and ones involving fetish garb like boots, latex catsuits, and ball gags. So this hit all my buttons, and I enjoyed it. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 15, 2004 |
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Story an interesting start for a longer tale. Moves a little slowly. A little interaction on the part of the victim would help; even just a glance at her eyes in fear could reenforce the mood of the story. (6/10)
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julise
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Mar 14, 2004 |
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I thought that this story was wonderful for a short piece. Yes, Anne has written better, but this one was just fine in its own right, in my opinion. Anne continues to hold my admiration of her BDSM writing skills. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 14, 2004 |
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ARRRRGH Foiled again by another insidious review by that arch sadist Lex Ludite! He keeps saying what I want to say, except he always gets there before me. Yes, the author had a good idea but executed it poorly. I should actually be more positive, yes I did enjoy it and yes the author has acceptable writing skills. But I long for a slowly developing story of terror wherein a female is progressively coerced into degredation and the mortification of the flesh. My Lord, I am depraved! But after-all, this is the point of this site. But Anne Grey is, truly, a depraved author and I have come to expect only the finest from them. (6/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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Great synopsis, NOT! I enjoyed the start and finish of this little story, but the rest didn't do much for me. There was infinite detail, but that's all it was, nothing to generate much heat or interest, to be very honest. I've read much better from the author and will continue to check out her efforts despite my reservations about this one. (5/10)
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