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Jake by Me
Author: Enos Quill
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(Added on Mar 9, 2004)
(This month 55545 readers) (Total 78730 readers) |
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Jake is upended by two brats. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
ropebinder
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Jun 21, 2005 |
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Highly erotic! Edgy! I wish it would have gone longer. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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This is a good start. I am looking forward to the arrival of the spurned girl. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Mar 12, 2004 |
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Don't read this review if you don't want part of the plot given away! So, it's a hot story, except I thought the two girls resorted to threats of violence too soon to capture Jake. He already agreed to do "anything" on account of losing that bet, so why didn't the girls just say, "Yea, well how about letting us tie you up?!" Aside from that, I really loved the story. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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This has all the makings of a winner. The characters, especially the two predators, are very well drawn. Putting the shoe on the other foot, so to speak, is a nice touch. Looking forward to further developments. The current rating will in all likelihood change as the story develops further. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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great start, pleas keep it going. Would love to hear what happens next. (9/10)
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