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Countdown
Author: Slydreamer
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(Added on Feb 27, 2004)
(This month 53848 readers) (Total 64513 readers) |
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A Mistress shows off a technological nightmare to her submissive and teaches an object lesson with far reaching consequences. a slight sci fi device, but otherwise a very plausable story. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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ha ha... very funny. the worst punishment indeed. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Mar 3, 2004 |
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very interesting concept with a surprise ending.
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| Reviewer:
Wyn
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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I thought this was a good story with an interesting concept. It wasn't too short for me, but the ending was left too open. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 27, 2004 |
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Too short, in my opinion, and maybe a bit too much left to the reader's imagination, but well-written none the less. (7/10)
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