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The Contract
Author: Eve Adorer
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(Added on Dec 24, 2003)
(This month 26908 readers) (Total 54846 readers) |
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In strong willed unthinking stupidity, fiery tempered beauty Sabrina, signs away her inheritance and must suffer extreme and painful humiliation to get it back. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 3, 2007 |
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One of the best whip scenes ever. Wish there was lots, lots more (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 18, 2005 |
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Liked the story a lot... Not as 'good' as the other fantasies from Adorable Adorer's hand, but still a must-read...
Thank you, Miss Adorer.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jun 14, 2005 |
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Sabrina was a very colorful characters though we would have liked to see more details of the others in the story. There were some grammatical problems with the story, but it didn't detract too much from the plot. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 21, 2004 |
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This has got to be one of the oddest, over the top stories ever posted on this site. It's what a Harlequin Romance written by Franz Kafka might have read like. The writing style sort of reflects the amazingly egocentric Sabrina; it's extremely florid, exciting, totally out of control and maddenly frustrating to try to read! The other characters pale in comparison to her; she is the whole show and a very entertaining one in places. On the down side the writing at times is incomprehensible. There are run-on sentences that are gargantuan in length and yet convey very little meaning. In contrast we are treated to one word sentences, collections of words disguised as sentences and sentences that break all the rules of grammar. This story could have benefitted greatly from some disciplined editing, for it has plenty of energy, a fair degree of heat and a great main character. I would love to see what this author could produce with some professional assistance, for she certainly has talent. (5/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Jan 6, 2004 |
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For once I disagree with lex. The Kafkaesque prose style is one of the charms of this piece. Lex loves his prose straight, I enjoy writing that is as kinky as the plot and action. And the action is kinky indeed - one of the most bizzare whipping scenes I have ever read.
Let's hope that the author gives us another adventure of Kate and Sabrina, perhaps told from the perspective of Kate, perhaps involving the chastisement of Kate! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 1, 2004 |
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A good read (7/10)
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Powerone
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Dec 25, 2003 |
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The description of the whipping, especially the forcing of the victim to spread her thighs so that she could be whipped on her open sex was the best I have seen. (9/10)
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