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The Intern
Author: E. E. Norcod
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(Added on Nov 15, 2003)
(This month 72106 readers) (Total 104000 readers) |
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Paula Murphy, a senior at a Catholic girl's college finds that in the PAM Universe life as an intern can be rough in the New World Order law firm of Wiley and Associates. In her first summer week she discovers a lot about the world and herself that the good sisters never taught her. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 28, 2004 |
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I enjoyed the story, but as lex said, i did not care for the "diary" type layout, i do not feel it was necessary to date each section, just the story as it is would have been fine (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 15, 2004 |
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This reader is very uncomfortable with the format of this story, it's almost like reading a script. The proofing leaves a great deal to be desired. Why did the author suddenly decide to abandon the use of the question mark about midway through this installment? Worse still is the numerous incomplete sentences. Now to the flip side of this review. I do like the plot and the fact that the author goes to the trouble of establishing some history and background to allow us to gain some familiarity with the world we are visiting. He certainly has done an excellent job of setting the stage for our extremely naive heroine who will hopefully get everything she deserves and then some for being so presumptuous about her future. This reader has invested enough time in appetizers, it's now time for the main course to be served. I trust that the author will take my criticism in the spirit in which it is intended.
It took a bit to get around to reading the final two chapters, but it was certainly worth it. Another slow but very sure effort from the prince of punishment. I certainly admire his work with that strap, but it's his urbane approach to things corporal that I enjoy the most. My rating has been boosted somewhat in recognition of a job well done and true. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
e.e. norcod
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2003)
- Dear lex
Sorry about the grammatical goof-ups. Normally I write on my beloved PC but halfway through writing this serial I had the hard disc blow out. I had to finish writing almost a month later on a Mac laptop. As a result my usual attention to some of the mechanics of proofing lapsed. I should do better on the next three installments.
Paula is certainly headed for trouble. However, be warned, the story has a happy ending.
Thanks for the review. Here is to stern punishments handed out to innocent schoolgirls!
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Faibhar
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Dec 19, 2003 |
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Dress codes, or rather, colored coded dress codes continue and for those unfamiliar with prvious enstallments this lates is a stand alone although reading the whole work is best. In this latest there are the aforementioned dress/color codes, an admired office manager and even a secreted bottle of German white win. Furthermore, who could not resist a Friday beating of bimbo's butts during a conference room chastisment session?
Recommended reading for all who can relate. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
e.e. norcod
(Edit) (Nov 19, 2003)
- Counsellor Faibhar
Sorry I did a lousy job of describing the layout of the Law Offices of Wiley and Associates. I may be able to remedy this in Chapters 3 or 4. Actually I was thinking of the offices of a firm that once occupied the 66th and 67th floors of the Sears Tower. You may be sure that there are a few twists and turns before the four parts of this serial are over. However, the Rev. Norcod always has a happy ending in store, no matter how long it takes and no matter how much pain and humiliation the heroine must endure to get there.
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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I love the almost tongue in cheek PAM setting. I always have. Great work! (8/10)
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Demosthones
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Nov 19, 2003 |
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I liked the story alot. Not to be ignorant, but what does PAM Universe stand for? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
e.e. norcod
(Edit) (Nov 19, 2003)
- Personal Assistant Magazine Universe. Personal Assistant Magazine or PA Magazine is a spoof of certain publications targeting secretaries and office managers. PA Magazine, which is published quarterly online skewers the Politically Correct stance of certain segments of the publishing industry. In the next download of this serial, which will probably be appearing later this week, there will be links and references to other aspects of the world of PA Magazine which appear on BDSM Library and elsewhere on the net.
Thank you for your review.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 15, 2003 |
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Fun start, lots of possibilities. Looking forward to more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Nov 15, 2003 |
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Well written story about humiliation in a law firm. I'd like to see more chapters of it as this seems to be only the beginning. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
e.e. norcod
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2003)
- Dear Satan
You are correct. There are three more chapters that will be posted at weekly intervals. Thank you for the courtesy of your review.
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