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The Crux Club
Author: jessica Gentry
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(Added on Oct 21, 2003)
(This month 105134 readers) (Total 140481 readers) |
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Young couple very into BDSM scene joins a club specializing in crucifixion. Before long they get in way over their heads. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
skullchaser
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Oct 30, 2011 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I normally don't go for snuff stories, but in this case it works and it works well. It makes the story what it is - a mix of sexuality and horror. I liked the concept of the game being a couples thing, with each contributing to the final act. The insight into Lori's thought process during the action is very well done and believable, and having the husband in a cage as a helpless witness adds a great deal of extra drama to the scene(s). If I had to make one criticism, it's that the unlucky ten couples weren't stripped naked when their marbles were drawn. Having ten people forcibly stripped would've added some suspense to the piece. But, overall, I think it's one of the better crucifixion tales that've been posted. Good job! (9/10)
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yayo064
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Jun 28, 2011 |
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amazing, exactly the kind of story I never read and I love...
is there more jessica?
regards (10/10)
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Daemeon
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Dec 9, 2005 |
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This was a very enjoyable story. It got a bit quick in some parts, and the end contradicted most of the rest of the story in many ways for little positive effect in return. I liked the brutality, and think that this story is much better, and for that matter, realisitic, than the other one. (8/10)
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Jones, Nikka
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Nov 12, 2003 |
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I can not wait for Jessica's next story, although I do not know how it could be better that this one. It really made me care for Lori and Ken is quite believable. The description of the whipping and the crucifixion itself are just hot. And the end is a shocker. I had to read the epilogue twice just to make sure I had read it right. I now have a serious crucifixion fetish/fantasy. (10/10)
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jl_anktil
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Nov 1, 2003 |
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Very good, for a very difficult subject. Human suffering (whipping, crucifxion,...) is so hard to describe convincingly, and doesn't suffer haste. Still, one of the best I have read on the subject And the story gets better as it progresses. Thank you, more please. (8/10)
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kaleun76
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Oct 31, 2003 |
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Well written, sort of consensual. Achieves momentary suspension of disbelief.
More please. (9/10)
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frenchgus
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Oct 31, 2003 |
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More please like that (9/10)
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catheee
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Oct 25, 2003 |
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it kept my attention..scarey (7/10)
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Tim_Id
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Oct 24, 2003 |
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The first part is too rushed. Not enough detail about Lori and Ken, so we don't care much about them as people we know. The writing gets better as the story progresses. Great ending. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Oct 23, 2003 |
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Guys you are being too hard on jG. Now I have to admitt that snuff is not my favorite. But this story deserves a TEN - WOW. I have read some pretty good crucification stories and so rotten one, this is one of the best. Yeah the beginning was rough and some little details here and there could be better polished. But this is still one of the best. And, yes, I liked the twist at the end. (10/10)
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Equalizer
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Oct 22, 2003 |
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A no-holds-barred 'erotic crucifixion' story. Generally well written and error-free, the story started awkwardly but got better as it went on. If you don't mind me saying, it could be improved with a little more coloring, such as dialogs, background, and more characterization. (8/10)
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Faibhar
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Oct 22, 2003 |
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A singular subject (crucifixion) well portrayed by the writer. (7/10)
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