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The Secret of Shondra's Success
Author: Alex Bragi
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(Added on Oct 17, 2003)
(This month 8027 readers) (Total 16407 readers) |
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An older man teaches an innocent young woman how to use her most valuable assets to her greatest advantage. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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A nice little story of innocence educated. Nicely told with an economy of words. You might have elaborated a bit on the D/s aspects of the relation with Mr. James. Makes me want to go into education at least in the realm of fantasy. ( OK I reviewed this story because I havent had a chance to go through the 18 chapters of your newest story. I see you've picked up an editor or two in the transition) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2005)
- Thanks, Mad. Yes, I believe you're right, it could have used a stronger bdsm element.
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Jan 17, 2004 |
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Good story. I liked it because it had a different approach (someone being taught to use the virtues nature has given her and all), but would have liked a little more BDSM. I'd really looking forward to read some new stories from you :) (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Jan 20, 2004)
- Thank you. Yep, I think you're right - a little more bdsm.
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