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Framed
Author: Bossk of Port Kor
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(Added on Oct 5, 2003)
(This month 58139 readers) (Total 82410 readers) |
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A female FBI agent, anxious for some excitement, investigates a white slavery connection and soon finds trapped in a bondage frame and tortured into submission. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 16, 2003 |
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A good, solid job. The twist at the end was predictable and too much got glossed over, but on the whole, enjoyable. (7/10)
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Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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I really enjoyed the read and it generated enough heat for me. The plot is somewhat of a re-thread but that simple little plot is always a fascinating look into the aspects of why women (myself not excluded)find a certain tension and drawing dynamic to the white slavery concept. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Oct 10, 2003 |
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I thought this was a very capable effort, and didn't notice any spelling or grammatical errors. A reviewer complained recently about the cliche of 'standing back to admire his handiwork'. Well, I too have personal gripe, which is an opening paragraph where the heroine discovers herself to be immobile, gagged and blindfolded. I managed to overcome that initial aversion and enjoyed the story. Perhaps the story could have been somewhat longer given that it had a plot, but in any case it was worth reading. I hope the author is encouraged to contribute again. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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What there is here is fine, up to a point. Let's face it, this particular story has been told so many times that it could probably be generated by a computer program. The author certainly has enough talent to break out of this self inflicted strait jacket. (5/10)
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castle2001
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Good story line. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Enjoyed it very much. I enjoyed the explicit descriptions of the punishment Carol received. Please write more. (9/10)
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